Mind rambles on
Eyes remain silent
Mouth speaks for long
Claustrophobic in a crowd
Swarmed all alone
Ears listen nothing
Heartbeats create mayhem
Not all alone
Yet seeking someone
Light does not enlighten
Darkness calmly enfolds
Nothing moves forward
Life rushes by
Mere spectator no more
Live it up, will I?
Perplexed Gemini speculates
Twin of emotions
Liberated Gemini knows
One choice to make
6 comments:
Not all alone
Yet seeking someone
Light does not enlighten
hmmm some powerful lines..
Cud have comtd on the Gemini thing,but I left Ms Goodman when I was a kid and moved on ...lol
well., it's a beautiful poem,good to read and the flow is diligently made.;)
lovely words...you have crafted it beautifully...I can really feel the words....Wonderful lines!
fellow gemini! familiar thoughts but *sigh* how oh how do you phrase the words so beautifully! :)
ps: love the last para ;)
agree with the other people here. U , seem to be very particlcuar abt the corrct use of words , to extrct the exact sense.Exquisite is all i have to say.:)
beautiful poem.explicitly expressed.
i am a gemini too. i can second to your views.
Whoa!!!
Simply awesome
"Claustrophobic in a crowd
Swarmed all alone
Ears listen nothing
Heartbeats create mayhem"
An awesome imagery.
Keep it rollin;)
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