Thursday, May 27, 2010

A cup of coffee and an evening stroll

Unfinished never-ending friendly lively talks

Discussing books music films over long walks

Eternity was never our goal

We were content with a cup of coffee and an evening stroll


We had our fair share of horrible mistakes

Not to forget a couple of massive heartaches

Fortunately immortality was never our goal

We were content with a cup of coffee and an evening stroll


The marriage of two souls

Walking on burning red coals

Well that was never our goal

All we wanted was just a cup of coffee and an evening stroll






This is an attempt to write a poetic fiction in 100 words. A poetic drabble if you will. :-)

9 comments:

fatoori said...

bhaisaab brilliant hai ye toh..very nice work..amongst the best of your poetry, i think :)gud job

Aditi said...

Wow! this is brilliant..loved every bit of it...reminded me of all your CCD talks...
"We were content with a cup of coffee and an evening stroll" :-)

sunaina said...

As pretty as the person who wrote it :-)

thoughtbubbles said...

"Eternity was never our goal
We were content with a cup of coffee and an evening stroll"

The best lines and the best poetry I have come across in long time!
I loved it! Thanks :)

kavita said...

I loved this one and even i join in saying that it is one of the best poetry i have come across in blogger as yet.Cheers Priyanka !!

Scribbler said...

A hundred words that speak volumes

keep it rollin;)

vipin said...

Lovely !! Another magnum opus from Blogeshwari :)

Azad Alam said...

'' Is it really a fiction..??'' thats the beauty of it. You live what you write. Beautiful !

yamini said...

As is proved by the compliments galore above, you have touched the right chord here.
We all crave for the small things in life and yet run after the big ones.
I guess that is the irony of life.
But, as for me, I am always up for a cup of coffee and an evening stroll... :-)