Unfinished never-ending friendly lively talks
Discussing books music films over long walks
Eternity was never our goal
We were content with a cup of coffee and an evening stroll
We had our fair share of horrible mistakes
Not to forget a couple of massive heartaches
Fortunately immortality was never our goal
We were content with a cup of coffee and an evening stroll
The marriage of two souls
Walking on burning red coals
Well that was never our goal
All we wanted was just a cup of coffee and an evening stroll
This is an attempt to write a poetic fiction in 100 words. A poetic drabble if you will. :-)
9 comments:
bhaisaab brilliant hai ye toh..very nice work..amongst the best of your poetry, i think :)gud job
Wow! this is brilliant..loved every bit of it...reminded me of all your CCD talks...
"We were content with a cup of coffee and an evening stroll" :-)
As pretty as the person who wrote it :-)
"Eternity was never our goal
We were content with a cup of coffee and an evening stroll"
The best lines and the best poetry I have come across in long time!
I loved it! Thanks :)
I loved this one and even i join in saying that it is one of the best poetry i have come across in blogger as yet.Cheers Priyanka !!
A hundred words that speak volumes
keep it rollin;)
Lovely !! Another magnum opus from Blogeshwari :)
'' Is it really a fiction..??'' thats the beauty of it. You live what you write. Beautiful !
As is proved by the compliments galore above, you have touched the right chord here.
We all crave for the small things in life and yet run after the big ones.
I guess that is the irony of life.
But, as for me, I am always up for a cup of coffee and an evening stroll... :-)
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