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Friday, May 08, 2009
Drabble
A few months back, I discovered the beauty and challenge of a drabble. A drabble is a work of fiction exactly one hundred words in length (title of the story included). As Kris made me understand, the purpose of a drabble is brevity, and it is a real test of an author's ability to express [hopefully] interesting and meaningful ideas in an extremely confined space. I had promised to try this out and here is my first attempt.
Except
The two sat on a red cushioned chair. They ordered two cappuccinos. They discussed politics, places they wanted to see, several friends, a few foes, films, music, books, weather, past, future, nothing important, everything trivial. Once or twice he flirted, she blushed. He teased and she pretended to be angry. Failing to put on an act she burst into peals of laughter. The waiter brought the steaming hot cups to the table. They stopped talking for a few seconds as if they were keeping a secret. Once he left, they resumed the never-ending conversation and spoke of everything, except…
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19 comments:
:) very interesting..d flow is dere..the end left me at some kind of an edge (i guess thats wot it was intended 2 do)..is it a technical fault (so to say), that this drabble consists of 99 words and not 100 (or u r counting the dots 2?)
Fatoori: You forget that the title is an integral part of any story. Pls do a re-count. :-)
And knowing me you should know that although I hate Amir Khan, I am a perfectionist myself!
oh come on..i dont think d title qualifies as a part of the word limit of the actual story..but m nt sure, ds it?
of course it does...
you can check out Kris' post that I have linked in my blog.
oki!! it does :)
I do like this one. Is it a true story perhaps...?
Hmmm nice one. But Why this "Jhumpa Lahiri" style ending. I mean things left to the understanding/assumptions of reader. I love this style but it leaves the reader like me disturbed about thinking what is that I dnt know ???
"except" part would have been - how to get away without paying the bill ??
nice one ..with a tinge of mystery!!!
@ Fatoroi: I am glad you gave up :P
@ Kris: Its not a true story. But I am glad you thought so. Makes me a convincing fiction writer. :-)
@ Vipin: It nice to exercise the brains once in a while. :-) Think what they might have wanted to say.
I think the Bill part is funny...
@ Rahul: I think mystery is good, don't you?
yup, love it!!
Hi
Thats grt!!
Never heard abt this b4.
Keep enlightening all of us...
chk my blog too pillij..
I am impressed.
Pri, u are definitely going from strength to strength. More power to you....
i loved the ending priyanka- deliciously vague :)
Whoa! What an imagery except...
K....I feel may be the same thing to which Esha replies "sochti hoon" in this video [ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LZYUSUrskVQ ]
Scratching my head again for what Ajay would have asked? not sure what ? but certainly not about switching over to Tata Indicom. :-)
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