The dreams I see for you
Are mine left unfulfilled.
The promises I make,
Are those that never came through for me
The imperfections I try to smoothen from your life
Are ones that have creased mine for long
The role that I attempt to play in your life
Is of the one whom I miss most in my life
I try hard, but I let you down
My gifts fail to win your heart
When I try to bring a smile on your lips
I just see tears in your eyes
It’s not your fault I know
Conceding failure becomes a daunting task for me
I shout and scream, rant and rave
Its not at you sweet angel
You are not my child, I know
But I love you more than I could love my own
It might be hard for you to believe
But one day I might actually win you over
One day soon...
19 comments:
..sure is from the heart..:)
Happy sibling times..!
hi Pinka Singh,
The words really touched my heart and prove, yet again, that no matter how much the siblings fight with each other, the blood always turns out to be thicker, Hope to read much much more from you....
Love,
Yamini
:)
God bless!
keep it rollin;)
Both of you are a blessing for each other .:) :)
Very heart-warming \.
beautiful post! :)
I smiled and smiled and laughed a little too :)
very cute and sweet piece.
god bless u n ur bro..
ver well written , both brother and sis resemble each other !
this post..it truly touched me
one of the best poems i have read in a long time
beautiful!!!!
Awww..... So warm and touching..did Akshat read it?? What was his reaction?
really nice poem
Suveeet one
that's so nice. reminds me of my eldest sister. It's really so heart touching.
That's really nice. Very heart touching. I want to say the something similar for my youngest sister and want to hear the same from eldest one. I wish i could write something so aesthetic for them.
surelt from the bottom of your heart. god bless both of you
awesome truly liked it..he is blessed to hava sis like you..im fallin short of words..:)
awesome truly liked it..he is blessed to hava sis like you..im fallin short of words..:)
that was really beautiful.god bless
Hi Priyanka,
This one is really very very touching and heart warming!
It literally brought tears to my eyes:)
You write exceptionally very...Look forward to read more!!
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