I saw a child playing with a paper sheet
He folded it once, and then twice
I saw several slices of life as he folded it thrice
They say pre-decided has been each fold
Each crease is living its destiny I’m told
But I was amazed to see the wrinkled mould
As life in a million ways I witnessed unfold
The fist that folds the first love letter
The kiss that treasures promises of a future better
The eyes that hold a thousand dreams
A wedding dress that has happiness stitched in its seams
These I could count on my finger tips
Several were lost by the time they reached my lips
I concentrated hard to remember what I could
I was sure I could carve more sculptures from this folded wood
Before more mysteries I could unravel
My little guide decided to greener pastures travel
He picked up a twig next
Challenged me to come up with a philosophical text
Without a word I surrendered to the master
Complex folds I can understand but twigs offer simplicity I cannot factor
I’m not done with analysing the folds I pleaded
He just smiled the smile of a saint and receded
11 comments:
I don't as a rule read poetry-but this touched a chord somewhere. The "Folds" in the title caught my geographer's attention, but then I was quite moved by the words and the thought that was behind them.
Crisp !! To be honest, after reading first two stanzas itself i went into thinking about Ann Marie and then couldn't finish then after.
But as i always say, you gotta collect and publish them in a book some time. for sure. hopefully before i die.
Get your book published.. become an author..let the world know of your creativity or else get your own blog book!
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You chose some words not easy to rhyme. I liked it very much.
very impressed. Interesting observation.
keep it rollin;)
took me two readings to understand the beauty of this one.very cute poem, if i may use dat word for it :)
life is in the finer details, which lie in those folds :) keep writing dude
sorry, dudette
What you have written is simply super!
Even i want to do the same, damn sick of working in this distant suburb ;)
u r so so very blessed wid dis art !! keep writing coz i wanna keep reading :D god bless
u r so so very blessed with this art.. keep writing coz i wanna keep reading.. :D god bless ya
beautiful !!!! look into each folds of life to discover all its treasures.
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